I do, but...would it help to read it to me? Generally I find that helps me catch more errors than going over it myself, or find out what I'm missing. After all, it's your time to shine with this!
[she smiles, and it isn't subtle that she wants him to do that - to explain it to her, and open her mind to that part of work.]
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[she smiles, and it isn't subtle that she wants him to do that - to explain it to her, and open her mind to that part of work.]