one fragment ❖ r.furude

[miisdealt]

There's a poem that I'd like for people to read and share their thoughts on. I'm not sure how good it is, so I was thinking that maybe having it in a public forum like this would allow for some discussion.

Committing a crime isn't scary.
The scary part is to admit it.

Receiving a punishment isn't scary.
The scary part is to know the pain of it.

Neither crime nor punishment will be gone from the world,
Because humans are unable to know their future.

Alternatively, if you do not like poems, or would like another question to chew on: there isn't some sort of magic that can make someone become older, is there?

You can say that curiosity killed the cat, really. If you have your own poems to share, I'd like to read them as well. Writing these sorts of things is a hobby of mine, I suppose.

Comments

un: s.dito

[necrophily]

[ sorry he's going to address each of these points a whole lot less poetically. ]

no it's not we've had like multiple murder confessions on here

pain sucks but some people are into that

humans all die

and why would you wanna look like a hag lol

[miisdealt]

Whoever said this was about murder in the first place, or even this place?

[Poems are up to interpretation normally of course, but the writer is literally right here to rebuff them as needed.]

If some people are into pain, I don't think I've seen one yet. And certainly, humans may all die, but that doesn't mean that they necessarily don't live, either. Even in a world without us in it, that doesn't mean life doesn't go on, or their existence isn't cut short.

And I never said that, don't put words in my mouth. I was just simply curious, as I found myself in a much older body this morning. Although I wouldn't quite say that being the supposed age that this physical body is makes me a hag.