one fragment ❖ r.furude

[miisdealt]

There's a poem that I'd like for people to read and share their thoughts on. I'm not sure how good it is, so I was thinking that maybe having it in a public forum like this would allow for some discussion.

Committing a crime isn't scary.
The scary part is to admit it.

Receiving a punishment isn't scary.
The scary part is to know the pain of it.

Neither crime nor punishment will be gone from the world,
Because humans are unable to know their future.

Alternatively, if you do not like poems, or would like another question to chew on: there isn't some sort of magic that can make someone become older, is there?

You can say that curiosity killed the cat, really. If you have your own poems to share, I'd like to read them as well. Writing these sorts of things is a hobby of mine, I suppose.

Comments

[miisdealt]

It's okay if it doesn't help me. I'm happy enough to learn, and grateful to hear that you'd share something like that with me. I'll have to come up with some way to repay you.

[silentabyss]

yeah its not a problem. i know we dont know each other well but youve always seemed really nice and responsible, so i trust you not to damage things

you dont have to repay me rly i dont need it!! but i have a feeling youre going to insist. so if you feel like repaying me, can i actually request help learning how to cook?? im really bad at it and i know you were in the cooking contest

[miisdealt]

Thank you.

Well, I have already been teaching Kaede how to cook, so teaching another isn't a problem. I can't say I'm master chef level, but I've done most of the cooking on my own for the longest time.

Just let me know what time is good for all of this.

[silentabyss]

um... maybe on sunday some time since we dont have classes and i should be done with homework by then? we can go over magic and cooking in the same day, it'll be fun probably

[miisdealt]

Sunday it is!

I'm sure it'll be a lot of fun. Nipah~☆